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Copy Writer Secrets: Try This Benefits Builder

More Copy Writer Secrets You Can Use

A common mistake for home-grown sales copy is to name features and technical dimensions of the product or service, instead of the real benefits.  When you're inside the company, and maybe even inside the product development team, it's difficult to extricate yourself from the inside "lingo".  

Try My Magic Worksheet

The worksheet below prevents this error in your copy writing. Look at the three examples in the tinted boxes, then try using the technique for all your features. You can make your own Excel spread sheet and build dozens of benefits or use the printer-friendly button below or you can download a longer, blank worksheet below and really go at it.  I learned this tip in some sales training 20 years ago and I've modified it and relied on it all this time.

                                                How to Build Headlines Like a Pro
                                     (Uh oh. They're gonna kill me for sharing this with you.)

The more you conceive, the better because you can use them as subtitles too.  Build the "negative" benefits first; most people buy to avoid pain and loss rather than to gain some goodie.  Complete the sentence, "So, you don't have to worry about..."   Then, you may want to create headlines from those benefits that are more positive.  Try a question.  Try long ones and short ones. (Longer ones usually win in direct-response tests.  I know. I know. It's counter-intuitive. But true.) 

Benefits & Headlines 
WORKSHEET
"It works every time!"

PRODUCT or
SERVICE


FEATURES

BENEFITS to HEADLINE

Mutual fund...

No-loads or fees

So you don't have to worry about...

losing your hard-earned profits to commissions and fees.

Headline:  "Don't Let Fees Eat Up Better Returns !"

Vitamin Tablets...

High dissolution rate

So you don't have to worry about...

using vitamins with nutrients that your body can't absorb.

Headline:  "Nutrients your body can really absorb!"

Biotech Software...

Multiple application platform with functional genomics workflow

So you don't have to worry about...

expensive integration layers or time-consuming data reformatting.

Headline:  "Avoid expensive layering  and time-consuming reformats!"

 
 
____________________
Your Product or Service



____________________
Your Technical Feature

So you don't have to worry about...

__________________________________________________________
Your customer's real benefit

Headline:

 
 
____________________
Your Product or Service

 
 
____________________
Your Technical Feature

So you don't have to worry about...

__________________________________________________________
Your customer's real benefit

Headline:

 
 
____________________
Your Product or Service

 
 
____________________
Your Technical Feature

So you don't have to worry about...

__________________________________________________________
Your customer's real benefit

Headline:

 
 
____________________
Your Product or Service

 
 
____________________
Your Technical Feature

So you don't have to worry about...
__________________________________________________________
Your customer's real benefit

Headline:

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